I read through quickly, buddy:) I'll savor the language again when I get fully up to speed!

One thing, lol, the first part kind of sounded like "bondage"...which ain't necessarily a bad thing:) The second part kind of ended up with my heart being like the one on your cover.

Yeah, it's you. Your unique voice and gushing style. Thumbs up!

Oh! my goodness pipping hot stuff
Not sure if it is for the eyes of an old lady like me. Past such thoughts mores the pity

remarkably sensuous

Well done