Thanks Wayne.
That's one of my fav movies. I'm sure the book's better. Most of the time it is.

That is a wonderful poem and the sad thing is that it happens in real life, when someone feels that way.

Thanks....we are the product of our past...without that....who and what are we?

I don't know what to say about this. I guess I should say it's a good poem, beautifully written. You really expressed a sadness, a longing for that one person. And in so few words, too. And also, it was as if I could feel the depth of that longing, as that person slowly disappeared. I love it, and since it was inspired by Serena's poem, I want to give her credit too. You two write such beautiful poetry together!

One of your finer works, Laz, truly expressing, in a gentle and touching way, the helplessness felt by a man in love. Quite beautiful!!

Laz,
Such depth of feeling expressed so beautifully!
Jack

Absolutely breathtakingly lovely lovely words

Oh wow...that was amazing, Laz. Just filled with pathos and longing! I think we should take Evaporating and Disappearing and put them in one book!
Both are so, so lovely!

You have written such beautiful words. I am so touched that I could receive a response from you about this situation and from something I wrote. Again lovely Serena