Well written and very impactful, but yes it was too short!

Too short and too sad but pretty well written. - Tina

beautiful short sweet and sad

this is brim full of heart ache
so sad and moving

I think this is very well portrayed

Short man...short.

Thanks Jack, they are not totally free but they do get around those obstacles a lot more easily.

Laz, little sentimental short essay. . Well written. I would take exception though with your analogy of the waves being free. Even they are not totally free. They have go around the obstacles in their way (rocks, boulders, etc). Poetic licence does allow for these kinds of images. I like the way you can play with words and images and relate them back to nature.

Jack