Well written, captivating and touching. Great style and the reader feels genuine emotions. Well done :) Great read

I haven't read the whole book as I'm stretched for time, but I'm putting it in my favorites for a later time. I like your style and what I've read so far, it makes me want to read more.
Loved your character's names.
Good luck in the contest
Wendyxx

Ark...if you wish for a bit more romance betwee those two, read the first book.
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-lazarus-the-healer-1

Wow I really loved reading this it was so different from anything I've ever read but in the best of ways. I found myself wishing that you would have put a bit of detail into Mara and Justin's love making but other than that it was a great read.

awesome read!

this was captivating and fully charged with emotion. I like it very much. I am saving it to favourites to read again

Very well done! Actually yes, your story did inspire me to write about a soul-mate! You're one of my favorite authors in Bookrix and please keep writing! :)

Thanks Angel...but let me make it clear...there are so many here at the club who are really great, and they can do circles around me til I get dizzy. These are the good friends who over the last year have helped me greatly. I bow to them.

This man has and does write some very good stories. No one is scared of him. Heck all of us that are friends of his accept his feed back when he comments on our work. He's honest but he doesn't always give people negative comments. You as a writer need to understand that it takes both good and bad feed back to become a better writer. And like Laz has pointed out. You have the nerve to put a bad comment on someones work that has written many books and short stories her on Bookrix. If you don't like what you're reading then just like you've mentioned you have freedom of speech. We as writers also have the right to write how we want. If you don't like it then stop reading it and move on to another story. But posting negative comments on everybody's work is just plain ridiculous. You need to also look up the word fiction in the dictionary so that you can understand what it actually means. But any who until you write more books or short stories of your own then giving bad feed back should be limited. Heck you have only been here since April of this year. Just my opinion.

Sorry to say, but all thoughout the story, Justin has a dilemma. He has to choose between two worlds. The fate of one depends on what his choice is.
Just because the earth doesn't blow up and there's no blood and gore, doesn't mean this story isn't conforming to the proper criteria.