Very touching,true love!

beautiful as always love it

What I loved most about your poem is the the originality of showing your love in such a special way. You wrote such a great poem, a very touching one indeed.

I loved it so I voted :D It's great because it shows the love without them having to be gone. Most people only wait for something to disappear before they realise it's true worth. It was lovely :D

So true...you got the point here perfectly, Tina.

People sometimes forget those that they once cherished when they are already gone. But in your case, you really showed your love to your wife through this poem. I think this is the true meaning of love; to continue to love the person even when you can no longer be physically together. Just voted!

You are brilliant in expressing love.

Such deep feelings that you have shared and I can relate to. you have my vote. Serena

Deep, poignant, sad but very true. You write with such feeling,Laz. Best of luck with this.

Touching. Your words evoke a deep response within, remembering all the loves both old and young.