that was so beautiful but very sad

To me this is someone so broken hearted over the change in a relationship. Sometimes we need to stop and remember how it was and fall back in love. Serena

As Paige said, each time you post a new work something finer seems to surface. There is such a heartbreaking melancholy in this piece, a quality, I think, heretofore not exhibited so--how should I say? SO intimately accessible.
Love, too, your frame narration. Good going, buddy. You've outdone yourself.

This is filled with so much love that it hurts, it's sad, but beautiful.

Congratulations.

Cauldar.

Gosh, Laz, I hope this is not how you really feel. Life is so short and we need to fill our lives with people who love and adore us. Living in a state of wanting, and not receiving, is so sad. You obviously are a man of passion, with so much to give.....

guess both work in down situations..P;]

go against your positive nature - this certainly hits chords in my life and on days of little sleep melancholy kicks in...you did this well - needs to go into contest coming up...will right soon - just need some sleep

good poem & hope you may found the one you are missing very much.