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sed01ona

Man that's good, have you read some of my books

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tina2010

I love the third and last poems; sweet and lovely with a little spice of mixed emotions. Thumbs up!

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allanbard

There are rhymes in this book even when you write in proze... One can feel all the feelings (sad and happy), reading your love letters, even just in one of your letters! Keep the good work going, my friend! Happy Holidays, have a Great New Year! Let this short poem of mine be a Christmas present for you :):

Love and happiness will be around,
as all the chains will disappear!
And Mountaineers will climb their mount,
and there won't be any tear!

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lazarus67

Thanks buddy

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mysterywriter723

Eloquent and gorgeous as usual, Laz. You are a master weaver of poetry. Lovely, yet sad as well.

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Rgabel

Words that dance well together weaving images of the different shades of love. Excellent work as always Laz!

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midknight

Beautiful! You have my vote!! :D

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ambersims

Great job. These were powerful poems full of emotion and heartfelt feelings! I saved them to my favorites!

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mitchell616

wow what a tear jerker beautiful i applaud your work

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gurashlak

Your intention to give a poetic touch to the letters is extremely good & I feel happy to read your all the four letters at a glance.

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breaunna

that book of poetry was so sweet, it made my heart melt into a thousand tears that come from an angel's love

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