Thanks Wayne.
Laz

great story ,Laz,thank you for sharing..Mari

I really liked the writing and the page formating you used. Kinda makes it all work together./joe
Vote!

Sweet!??..Oh, I think that is an understatement....lol
Thanks,
Laz

Sweet !

this is amazing loved every bit of it

The was absolutely breathtaking. Enchanting. Yeah there were a couple minor errors, but I'm so willing to overlook them right now. I think you found your niche. Medieval themed stories.

Thanks Val and Robynn
Laz

I have sent you a private message regarding two small fixes....but this was magical. I do believe I like this story better than any other. Your descriptions were magical. I could almost smell the scents emanating from the pages...and the sexual tension. . .. well!!!! Great job, my friend, and my vote too.

I am honored to get the chance to be the first person to congratulate you on a beautifully written love story. I am excited to be able to also cast the first vote! May you win with flying colors! Robynn