Í'm enjoying this very much... Keep up the great work, Laz! =-) Ignore the begging and share no more. I hope you get a shot in publishing this baby.

I enjoyed this beginning. Great job, Laz! You have a good start here that kept me aching for more. I wish you the best. Good luck! Gave you a vote and it deserves more than that. Thanks for sharing.

your book is very interesting, very well written!. My favorite kind of book..I wish G'luck in the contest..you deserve it!

Roger

Thanks Viola,
The complete story has to wait til after the judges vote. But the next chapter or two is going to be posted very very soon.
Thanks for your vote.
Laz

interesting Laz.. please do let me know when you come up with the next chapters. i want to know where this will end. and to let you know, i can't sleep with a mirror facing me. so this one is creepy! lol

Great I liked alot, the kids that pop up everywhere is creepy. But this is a great story plot. I likes it alot!!!!

To Book411....no you don't. It's more complicated then that. But if you know, tell me.
Laz

this is a book that I wont foget and well I think that you did a great job, the suspense was killing me but I think that I know what happened to the little kids, but no worries I wont tell.

and thats the, 411

Good luck in the contest!!

Thanks Melissa (The Writer ). This is my first attempt at mysteries,BUT you, my friend, have mastered it.