Thanks Jason, No, I'm not offended. In fact I really appreciate the counsel. I need as much as I can get.
There was one or two that I knew about, but at this point it's too late to make the changes.
Thanks again....Laz
Just finished reading and realy want to know more,loved the story line kinda reminded me of the old gothic horrors,when some one asks me to review there work I always try to be constructive and not just say how wonderful the writer is,i dont want to offend and what i say is just my opinion so here we go,on page 8 you wrote "from out of somewhere near me",to me it did'nt sound right I would have put from out of the darkness... mehr anzeigen
You’ve started with a great eerie setting in a dark lane. The fifth chapter ended with a great mystery. You left us, your readers, hanging for more of this story. Just voted!
Honestly, I think that is the best murder mystery I ever read! I hope my murder mystery comes half way to his book. I envy you! Read my book the Arts please. That is my horror one story not my murder mystery!
Thanks...I'm working desperately to finish it. Time is running out quickly.
This is one of the best books i have ever read!!! I can't wait until you make a second one :)
really really worth the vote! a fantastic read!! 10/10
NO! YOU DIDN'T FINISH IT! I WANT TO READ MORE! I love your story. Your writing flows great, and it is truly polished!! PLEASE, I want to read more! What is the end of the mystery??? :D But, one thing I was bothered by was when Alexandra was getting out of the bath, she saw the message/hand prints, and then it says she bolted into her room and under the covers. It sounds like she bolted up to her room, and got underneath the... mehr anzeigen
Thanks...no need to envy, We all shine in our own ways.
It just some of us have been shining for a lot longer time...lol. You are still young.