This was a good story. The suspense was just right, you didn't give away too much. In some cases I felt I didn't know enough. Still very well written.
awesome! i loooove horror and ghosts and all that, and this has to be one of the best ones i've read on bookrix! i agree with everyone else...this would've been perfect for the frightening fiction contest. Can't wait to read more. Good luck!
--lacy
Thanks Joe, if you liked it so far, just you wait.
Laz
Ps...I worked hard on the cover.
great start. It had my interest all the way
I can't wait to read the rest of it./joeparente
Interesting story :) A good beginning to a spooky tale. Would love to read more on this. You have my vote :)
I can't wait till the end to read it. Such a thrilling story! You have my vote.
You certainly know how to spellbind users with your story. I'm eager to know what happens next. great read. You have my vote.
Thanks so much Robynn, I forgot about 'to melt and becoming one with the molecules of liquid" Did I write that? I will have to go and check...lol
Laz
Love the word pictures you paint of that old house. I loved 'crunchy steps', and 'easing nature' and 'erelong'. Haven't heard that last one in a while. My favorite was 'to melt and become one with the molecules of the liquid'. You definitely have a way of putting words together in unique ways. So much talent! This is why I won't even attempt this contest yet! So you get my vote! Robynn
Thanks