Despite a few punctuation and grammatical issues, I enjoyed the raw storytelling in this tale. Especially liked Dani's POV, and the way she wants to prolong the sex act -- something I always tend to have the characters in my own books do too. Nate's climax over Dani always a good way to end in my opinion, although I was disappointed that the description of this was so short. Hot tale nonetheless

loved the book simply amazing and enticing ;]

Thanks for all the hearts and comments....here's chapter 2 enjoy ;)

i have decided to continue this book and add my own ideas please enjoy Nate and his wifey Dani sexual encounters also im gonna change the title and blurb too

you should get nate to join bookrix please so he can write all his little freaky tales would love it

Will u write more