Hi Koyel,

I agree with the others, you could definitely turn these into larger pieces. Your voice is a little different, which is a good thing; it has something to do with you descriptive and word choice. It evokes imagery. I think this type of writing is stifled by the 100 words. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Good luck

Bek :)

Thanks for sharing. Keep them coming. Gave you a vote. =-)

i really enjoyed reading your work willl read some more.thank you

That was a great story!!!

You did a nice job with bringing me into the story, even if it is a Drabble :)

Nicely written...very vivid and direct.
Keep it up. They can be expanded into fine stories.
Laz

good ideas...i wish you'd use the second one to write a longer version for some future contest upon hauntings or such...liked it a lot!..good luck friend!

Each story was different and complete. You did a fine job with only one hundred words to work with. I wish you all the best with this work.

with few lines you told a lot. I enjoy these Koyel...thanks for grabbing me and telling me you wrote them...Paula

Crispy and short. The stories are well written. Keep writing.