Very nicely written! I really enjoy your writing style. You have my vote!

I enjoyed this tremendously.

Very well done!

Put together very nicely. You are a pro at prose and poetry, don't you supprose?./joe

A great read. Good work and good luck.

P.S. If you have any time could you give my book a look at? It's in the family stories contest - Chameleon.

My Muse, a wonderful read, touches the places we hide within

Enjoyed it all!...Paula

Koyel - This really is a masterpiece. Each poem is in a different syle and you have demonstrated how emotive sujects can be contrained within a veriety of classical poetic forms. Because of this - and in spite of this -the collection has a wonderful wholeness. You are an excellent poet Koyel - please keep writing. JOHN

Hi Koyel, I read your book of poems, thank you for the invite. They were easy to read, however, I kept going back to one particular poem, and even at the end, I found myself going back again to. Reminiscence. This was the key poem to me, it was intact, direct, and the words elegant in their simplicity. Wa do, Elizabeth

Nicely done, and very readable./joe\ Have you read "The recipe". It is in the Family contest series?