when i was waiting to load this book, i was thinking that these poems must have something speacial, and as I read it, i am greatly inspired about the imaginations behind poems, every poem has a nice and simple way of expression.
Regards,
Farhan
The text is very transparent and you are very visible!
you know when i read "Winter (double Ethere)" i felt as you were, and i am talking about what the form suggests to me at least, lighting a candle (faint- strong- dim) .. such a nice form if i have to relate it to the author mental state, i would suggest " uncertainty, visibility-clear, and again uncertainty" :)
another poem "Ogres of my mind" all i can say that it reminds... mehr anzeigen
is lovely, Koyel! I enjoyed its diversity! You are a poet!
Good luck in the contest! Petra :))
I enjoyed your cocktail of poems. Good imagery and wording. I liked most 'The voice of my soul' and 'Love's sunset.' You are a talented poet. Voted.
The experiments in form are well carried out and some of the poems are really successful. Where they are not, it has to be said that the forms are really difficult to sustain; I read the whole book at one sitting and admire what you have done.
very nice i'd like to make poem's like you
Excellent imagry and creative word-usage. Also, including the many different poetry forms made each page fresh and interesting.
What a poetry delight that pulls heart string's and dances in deep drift's. At times I felt my private letter's were read aloud Koyel touches the very core of your heart
I've always been a fan of life poetry and yours are just what I read...
good job... hope to see your opinion on my book " Seasons for You "...