By the way, I am not a boy!!
Think about that please. I was snappy because I was tired.

despite the grammar issue. It was interesting. Unique. It was your idea, it was you. Your piece of mind.

Well he could have at least put it a little nicer. He didn't have to be so rude.

I personally don't think dingolover was trying to be insulting. He/she was just giving tips as to how to correct the book a bit. The whole point to posting your stories in a "Get Me Published" forum is to receive constructive criticisms and edit and correct as needed in order to be published. If you feel offended by what dingolover said then perhaps trying to get published is not the best idea...

There is a possiblity of this person you speak of with bad grammer, that their first language is not english. perhaps they are spanish, or japanese. Your comment was just an insult. I understand how you get frustrated at people's grammer, but don't always chalk it up to 'oh they just dont try'. Some people have learning disablitys, and are unable to understand. Im not ridiculing you at all, im just saying try to understand where these other people come from.

@dingolover

umm that was rude and if you didnt like my grammer and it really bothered you THAT much then you could have just stop reading the book. sounds smart right?

Look. its a good book but you should learn, grammar.
Its WERE. not WAS.
Its HAS not IS.
I not I'S.
Redo the book please and change the spelling.
How old are you?
If you are 12=13 I understand your problem. But if you are older. You must take english class.

Yeshh This Book Series Bouda be Like That!

THAT ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP WRITING!!!! i NEED to know the ending........ im just sayin

First of all let me say that i love this book already. Its interesting and Elisha has such an interesting mind. I crack up and adore her little internal rants.LOL

I've just read the first two chapters and its great so far.

Jemma