keep me updated when you finish the book :)
which was great by the way

yea totally cool please tell more!!

Thanks for the feed back ;) But the chacter Angel in this book is very very confused because basically wouldnt you be if you had to marry somebody you hardly knew but the dude is smoking hot but keep on giving me feed back I'll try to fix it :)))

first, just let me say one thing:
i LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!

but,...and just trying to help,...
its a little to fast pace. and things are a little confusing. one moment Angel is pissed and crying. in the next she and Tony are making out like crazy. One moment shes upset and cannot even thing about the possibility of even talking to him on the bus, let alone MARRYING him!!! and, i think, you should explained the riding of into the sun set thing-y. it didn't make any sense.
But, let me tell you this:
It's YOUR BOOK!!! What i mean is that you don't have to listen to me or anyone else. your in control; not me, not your friends(not dissing your friends for the record), or anyone else if you don't want to. so you cant take my advice or not, it's up to you.
But no matter what don't ever let anyone tell you its bad. IT'S FUCKING AMASSING!!!!! And, i personnly, LOVE IT!!! ;)

The Fay.

For those who are reading my book Thank you I will update a little everyday hopefully

Thanks for the heart and yes I'm going to try to update more

This is s really great book. If u r updating it can u tell me. THX