I like the storyline; it's interesting and I look forward to more of the story. However, this book needs a lot of editing. There are a lot of incorrect homonyms: "sense" instead of "since" and "peaking" instead of "peeking". Also, the tenses are not consistent, giving the story a rather jumbled effect.
I absolutely loved it! So detailed so amazing. I just wanna scream! To bad I'm in pulic. lol
- it needs minor proofreading but all in all well presented along with an enjoyable storyline...
I'm not usually inclined to read Werewolf stories, but after having read the opening page I was hooked.
You write smoothly and keep the story moving almost effortlessly! I grew to adore...Ace! Kudos! My vote.
I love the book!!!! Please email me when you update it!!!!!
i love it so far. what happeneds next kdavis8
ABSOLUTELY LOOOOVVVVEEEEDDDD the new chapter!!!!!! Please keep me updated!
This was awesome! I loved the story line and its full well rounded characters. Great JoB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!