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Light_Ark

Hey thanks for the friend request :) want to do a book traid? I read your story and you read mine. Just tell me which story I should read. Here is the story I'd like for you to check out whenever you have the spare time.
Hope we become great friends chow~ :D

http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-kristen-fox-red-fire/

Red Fire. Fate Eternal - Book One https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-kristen-fox-red-fire/ Two generations have passed since Never Ending Chaos The world is nowhere near recovery… Dion Blazon (aka Whirlwind) is a Scavenger for the Phoenix Hawks, a group with one goal; to save the wor...
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kestralvolta

Hey, I really enjoyed your book; I loved the names you used, for example, Sphinx and IrDA, and I loved the whole concept of N.E.C, I definitely think you should finish it :) i'll look forwards to an update :)
Erm, I don't mind which you read, but there is one I was in two minds... mehr anzeigen

Loss Of Identity: Gus. A Tale from Tyrell: City of Stone I http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-nicola-collings-loss-of-identity-gus/ Tyrell, a city divided. This is the first tale of many that led to the shattering of bones and tasting of blood: it starts with a love story. Gus had everything he wanted, but his only crime was fa...
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Faith.Raven

thanks for the friend request.

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kestralvolta

that's ok :)

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Glynis Rankin

Hey! Just wanted to come by and say thanks for adding my short work. It means a lot that you liked them, even though then need work. Also thanks for the friend request. :) I will check out your work too.

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kestralvolta

That's ok, I really enjoyed them :)

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Forever.Works.

Thank you, you gorgeous human being! The new heart on my story was such a lovely edition and I will cherish it always! If you liked 'Mystic Secrects' you should definitely go check out 'When a Darkness Falls' Thanks forever!

~Cheyenne

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Demonata-Freak

Hey, merci for the heart ma copain!!
What did ya think???
Did you have a favorite character or part???
Any criticism, good or bad???
Love to hear from ya :) Thanks again!!!

kestralvolta

hehe, everyone's had one of those embarrassing moments, and yeah, I'm a slow reader, but I loved the ending, and the entire concept of spirit animals, makes you wonder what yours could be :3 you planning on extending it or anything?? :D

Demonata-Freak

Yeah, it's just a lot of the things Trey has went through unfortunately I have myself lol .... although I haven't found a camp in the middle of a forest yet, but i live in hope XD
Oh, what kind of Spirit Animal do you want to be??? I always use my friends and families for... mehr anzeigen

kestralvolta

I'd like to think i'm something awesome, but i'd probably turn out to be like a rabbit or something, lol :) I'll await the next two :D and Good Luck to you! :D

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SHummel

Hey,
Ich wollte dir mal kurz eines meiner Bücher Vorstellen:

Mein neues Leben - Mit Alkohol und Drogen

Link: http://www.bookrix.de/_ebook-sina-mein-neues-leben/

Klappentext:

Skylar Blair führte ein ganz normales Leben, bis sie bei einem Autounfall ihren Bruder, ihre mutter und ihren Vater verliert, sie kommt auf ein Internat und versucht ihr Leben ganz normal weiter zu führen doch ihre Vergangenheit holt sie mit jedem Tag mehr... mehr anzeigen

Mein neues Leben. Mit Drogen und Alkohol https://www.bookrix.de/_ebook-sina-mein-neues-leben/ Skylar Blair führte ein ganz normales Leben, bis sie bei einem Autounfall ihren Bruder, ihre mutter und ihren Vater verliert, sie kommt auf ein Internat und versucht ihr Leben ganz normal weiter zu...
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Forever.Works.

Thanks for the friend request!:D
~Cheyenne

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kestralvolta

That's ok :)

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High Overlord of Ramenkind

Thanks for the heart on Human Testing!

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kestralvolta

that's ok :)

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Sasa-Tami

Hey ich würde dir gerne mein neues Buch "Eine bittere Enttäuschung und ein süsses Ende" vorstellen. Schau doch mal rein ;)

Was machst du wenn dein Herz gebrochen wurde?
Genau du schliesst dich in dein Zimmer ein und heulst dich erst mal bei deiner besten Freundin aus.
Und du lässt fast niemanden mehr an dich heran, da du die Angst hast wieder verletzt zu werden.
Doch was wenn du blind vor Liebe warst?
Was wenn dein Traumboy schon... mehr anzeigen

Eine bittere Entäuschung und ein süsses Ende https://www.bookrix.de/_ebook-sarah-schaerer-eine-bittere-entaeuschung-und-ein-suesses-ende/ Was machst du wenn dein Herz gebrochen wurde? Genau du schliesst dich in dein Zimmer ein und heulst dich erst mal bei deiner besten Freundin aus. Und du lässt fast niemanden mehr an dich heran, ...
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Gelöschter User

I read your book Loss Of Identity, and I loved the vocabulary you used. You have great imagination, and I love the names you gave to the characters of your book. Since you said that you don't mind criticism, I would suggest not using the same words in a sentence. For example: instead of using person two times, you can replace it with individual the second time. Just a suggestion. And I would appreciate any help on my book as well. :)

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kestralvolta

thanks for the criticism, I'll remember this for the future when I write others :D I'll be sure to have a look at your book :)

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Gelöschter User

No problem. And your work has great potential. Keep it up!! Oh, and thanks for liking my poem.

kestralvolta

That's ok, it was really beautiful, I love poetry like yours :)

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