Thanks for reading A Hunter's Tale, or taking the time to do so.

This was good. A different outlook on the traditional werewolf love story, and I applaud you for your creativity. =)

But, it was a little hard to read. Grammatical mistakes, no. The grammar was very good. poerhaps better than mine. =) But, your dialog definately needs some work. A good word of advice is to ALWAYS start a new paragraph when you have another character speaking and typically mention who did the talking.

Aside from that, this was very good and I can't wait to read more of your work =)

i like it but it deffinately needs to start from some kind of begining where there is like intros and stuff.

Love your stories!

R u young 2write more