Reeeallllyyy love this. I'm like the reader below. A love-hate for Dave, haha.
A few errors but it's not so bad I can't deal ^^ Just a suggestion, since you said you prefer some help. You capitalize some words after commas when they shouldn't be :)
Love it so far but can't help but having a love-hate feel towards Dave. Anyways please finish soon:)
Lmao, Thank you! & I'm planning to.
loving it .. xoxo
Thank you! [8
you just had to stop there didn't you?
Haha,keep going It really good!!!
Thanks, I appreciate it!
I they'll love this book please update I wanna know what happens next!!
I'll let you know when I updated! Thanks for reading. [:
aaahhh!!! suspense is killing me!! update please.
Soon. Won't promise but just I feel real positive about it!
I updated, it's not much but it's summer so I'll be updating frequently now!
omg thank you!
I love the update!!! i want to know what David was thinking when he saw Jaz for the first time since she came back. please inform me when you update
Definitely will. I'm glad you liked it; thanks for reading (:
You HAVE TO write more!!!
This weekend hopefully. I'll let you know, and thanks for reading. (:
I updated (:
K, thanks. Glad that you liked it and for the advice. When I have time, I'll re-read it and try to fix my errors.