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Oh my gosh you have to update, loved it I'm on suspense right no please notify me when you update it freaking amazing!!!!! XD
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Oh my gosh you have to update, loved it I'm on suspense right no please notify me when you update it freaking amazing!!!!! XD
It's soooooo good please update~~!! You misspelled some words and you left out words at some places I forgot where I got so caught up...IT'S SO GOOD!
I'll look that up as soon as I can! I'l let you know when I update and thank you very much, I'm glad you looked it!
Updated last night..
u are a greet writer
Thanks it means a lot!
I'm pretty sure that I about cried through the first chapter. I've never been bullied like that in my life life, so I can't imagine what it's like. Even so, I really enjoyed reading this book. Please update soon!:DDD:)
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I will update soon and it means a lot to me that you took your time to read my book. Again, thank you!
You are most certainly welcome!!!
" I always win, and you always loose. "
1. I really liked it!
2. Maybe take out the spaces from the quotation marks, it can be hard to understand at times because you don't know which line is the dialogue.
3. Just a few, minor spelling things.
4. Again, I LOVED THIS BOOK.
Great job on your first one,
A L I E N
Thanks, I appreciate your advice, I'll keep that in mind! I'm glad you like it!! :)
:)
gud chapter.. update soon plz!
Pretty soon I will :-)
Alright I'll be waiting :)
I updated!
Omg I no aye it's soo good freaking amazing :DDD