EVeryone have two sides and you showed us very well theirs. That was really strong. I think it would have been better if you put more details, but it was still very good. I think that Mellanie did all of this to Jaz only so she can put her anger into someone and I think 'Payback' is a bitch. As in the subtitle: An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind, so when Mel's father is doing this to her she starts acting like that with Jaz and then Jaz wants revenge, what a circle, hmm

I sure wasn't expecting that!!
I honestly hate Melanie and seeing her close to David is just upsetting:(

Hi.. Your book is nice, except that it need some editing works.. I'm enjoying your book. You should make David's character 'expend' stronger, and more 'bold' Then maybe he can win Jez's heart. I write too but still under progress. Please update your book soonest possible.. and good luck..

please update...i love this book.....jaz should not fall for david....he's an ass and a coward...jude was kinda hot in his own way......jaz should make those assholes suffer....david and his crew....an eye for an eye type of thing.....pleasssssssssssse update

I love it, please update soon again. I cant wait to see the homecoming, I expect something epic, I dont know why... :D :D

Nice update...Tell me when you update

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT BOOK was soo amazing!!!! i was looking fr a book exactly like that fr few days nd finally found it!!!!plz do update..............cnt wait fr wat happens next^.^

i love sia, elastic heart was perfect for this chapter!!!!

Wow :D That was AWESOME.... but I want it longer... thats so unfair... I want it to be done already so I can spent my day reading it and jumping on my place!!!
I love the beginning. Jaz's thoughts are awesome and I know that if I were in her shoes I would do the same :) There are a few mistakes, but they are fixable :)
Please update soon again.. I cant wait <3 <3 and many people say it, but I really do LOVE your story.

like the new chapter