I am 6 my nae is Freddie, I love your book.

A cute little story. I think it could be a bit confusing for a child though when you jump point of views.
Also, I think a child might like the creatures to be doing more stuff rather then talking about the love part. I think the child could get a little restless.
Good job though. Congrats. :D
P.S. Could you please read and vote if you think worthy my two stories in the Family Stories competition, To Smile While Crying and The Last Goodbye.

thanks for the encouragement! :)

way to go-this is great!

I am a big friend of Peter Panda !
Thanks for the great adventure!
Best wishes from Firefly