i don't mind the fast forward to the future part, but i think the end could be longer. Other than that I loved the book :)

please change the ending.......the book was fantastic.......

it was a fantastic book ,but in some of the sentences the grammar was incorrect. It was hard to make sence out of what you gave us.

I love the story!! the ending was also amazing ( like the rest of the story :D ) but it was a bit rushed. yet still AN AMAZING STORY :D

I agree, the ending was very rushed!! I don't enjoy a book with no real ending. Also, did they have not other life, responsibilities, just rich and spoiled? Kinda weird.

love the story but the ending felt rushed...?

Get to editing this to make more sense then it'll be perfect

I'm going to give you honest advice. This book goes really fast. I'm not trying to be rude, but the way the book was written wasn't good. I didn't like it. Next time try and slow things down a bit... give more detail and don't let it be so predictable.

yeah perfect i agree with Bookworm101, Its a awesome book so just shut up and get lost if you have nothing nice to say then dont say anything at all

worst book ever