I love it so far just keep up the good work!

work on writing the theme is good but it progressed really really fast you are not that detailed and the way you make them speak example as i walked towards her. As i approached i said, A way to get that accrosed without repeating the action would be As i approached her i spoke clearly showing i was not interested in what she had to say.

work on writing the theme is good but it progressed really really fast you are not that detailed and the way you make them speak example as i walked towards her. As i approached i said, A way to get that accrosed without repeating the action would be As i approached her i spoke clearly showing i was not interested in what she had to say.

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I LOVE YOUR BOOK PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAAAAAAAAASE MAKE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

LOVED IT!!! Please, please, please write more!!!! :)

Heeey thanks a lot ;)

it perfect the way it if put make sure she does the "hard to get" thing !! :D