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storyteller4

Read first 18 pages. I like dialogue - and mido wanting special sword but worthy only of a shiield not available. that gives a hint of the video game idea - I must admit I do not know of this game- heard of it but that is all. Clean writing - keeps me reading. Good luck on this piece. Will read more as you move it along. Janice

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judycolella

Wow, thank you! I really appreciate you looking at it so quickly!

By the way, my book is done and I want to send you a signed copy, but I seem to have misplaced your address. Could you send it to me again? I'd also like to send a copy to Val, but I know she'll insist on buying... mehr anzeigen