Read first 18 pages. I like dialogue - and mido wanting special sword but worthy only of a shiield not available. that gives a hint of the video game idea - I must admit I do not know of this game- heard of it but that is all. Clean writing - keeps me reading. Good luck on this piece. Will read more as you move it along. Janice
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Wow, thank you! I really appreciate you looking at it so quickly!
By the way, my book is done and I want to send you a signed copy, but I seem to have misplaced your address. Could you send it to me again? I'd also like to send a copy to Val, but I know she'll insist on buying... mehr anzeigen
Wow, thank you! I really appreciate you looking at it so quickly!
By the way, my book is done and I want to send you a signed copy, but I seem to have misplaced your address. Could you send it to me again? I'd also like to send a copy to Val, but I know she'll insist on buying it. I'd much rather surprise her with a signed one. By any chance do you have her home address? If you don't, or don't feel comfortable giving it out, I'll just ask her for it and hope she'll let me send her the copy.
Thanks again! You're a peach! 'D