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Valerie Diestro

I've read a few chapters. Zela and Neri's love story is sweet and beautiful. I'll read more chapters. :) Overall it was an interesting start.

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judycolella

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read it. I've written the rest of the first part (don't remember if I posted it or not because as soon as I started getting it ready, I went into edit mode - argh), and part of the second part.

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Kenzhie Addie

I just finished reading some few pages and I loved it. This is a really well-written book and it does inspire me to make my writing better. :D oh and dragons are amazing creatures that I would want to put in one of my fantasy stories next time. :)

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judycolella

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this. The first part is finished, but I haven't had time to post it yet. I've already begun Part II, but that, too, will have to wait until I've finished some more pressing things. Anyway, I'm delighted that you like it, and... mehr anzeigen

Kenzhie Addie

No thank you for giving me a good read. :) I love fantasy stories and dragon stories are really really amazing. So, I will look forward to reading your story to the very end. :)

Haha dragon games are quite fun, I agree. I'm a game geek too. :D

judycolella

Woo-hoo! That's awesome! No wonder you have such a great imagination and know how to tell a story!

Kenzhie Addie

haha Well that speaks for you too. :D and thanks! :)

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reggie600

Great story. Have you seen Malificent? Great dragon special effects.

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judycolella

They can do such amazing things with special effects these days. Smaug in "The Hobbit" was outstanding. Thanks for your comment about the story, by the way. I appreciate that!

Sadly, I'll never be able to publish it. I took the Draconic words from the world of Dungeons and... mehr anzeigen

reggie600

Rewrite it and change it up with your own words. It could be a best seller. Yea that dragon in Hobbit was fierce. Agreed. Writing is a guilty pleasure but you will get validation from readers. Keep up the good work and will check in sometimes to see what's new.

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I have to agree with you Judy. The hobbit films were amazing.

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Leah

great book Dragons are AMAZING

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judycolella

Thank you! I'll be posting Part II once my computer stops glitching, lol.

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sakurahimesama

This book was wonderful, i'm overjoyed that i got to read it :3

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judycolella

Thank you so much! Wow! I'm delighted that you liked it!

I've begun Part II, but haven't been able to get much done on it - I'm doing the NaNoWriMo thing, which is eating up most of my writing time, but after that's done, I'll probably get back to it.

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av8or2128

AWESOME!!!!!!!! I just finished reading 'Dahakoan' Judy dear when you further this story at some future time, It would be an honor to read such a thoughtful, loving tribute to the equality of all creatures great and small!!! Bravo my dear, simply AWESOME!!

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Gabriellak154

I'm only on page 27 and I love it!!!

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klaunius

got to page 16 and there was nothing after that

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Gwinevere Keethley

What happens next? Does Neri tell Kevin who he really is? I don't usually get sucked into a book that easily, but PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!! ^V^

P.S. If you can, please tell me when you update it??? ^v^ Thanks!!!

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guidedgal

Your ability to draw us into this new concept.( don't want to spoil anything) I got into every one of the characters, as if they were on a movie-screen. I hope that you will be adding to this. The suspense and anticipation is overwhelming! Bravo Judy, another winner in my book! :)

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