Hurry up and write more please!

very good, it keep me interest the whole time. can't put it down (wink) and yes keep writing!!!

Read chapter one. good start, and held my interest. I like details as you develop your character and an interesting one. Definitely keep writing. As you start chapter two also like the way you show she is different with bike riding etc.

Thanks so much for the hearts! You guys are awesome!

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it - wow! I'm working on chapter 4 today, and should have it and possibly the 5th chapter posted by tomorrow evening.

You made my day! 'D