you spooked me out big time pall.

that was raw

Good luck

Thank you! I'm glad you like this - it's my first try at writing horror, and I wasn't sure if I did it right. Your enthusiasm for it means a whole lot! :)

Omg just my kind of spooky! Lol voted and LOVE this!~<3

My favorite author has my vote.

Next time give me a kick.
So creepy. Well written little number.
Well done
Wendyxxx

Spooky and gripping tale. I was breathless with excitement and I voted.

A vote from you means a whole lot - thank you! And thanks, too, for your kind words of encouragement!

Thank you for your kind words! I'm really glad this helped you with English - it's a crazy hard language and I admire anyone who takes it on as a second language. Again, thanks!