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angelapriest

This could turn out to be one of the more unique stories about vampires. I believe it would be a good idea to take it further : )

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judycolella

Thank you - I'm so glad you enjoyed it. A couple of other people have suggested that I continue this, so maybe I'll give it a try. I appreciate your feedback! :D

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dismoak

i loved it is she going to find some one special

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judycolella

Thank you! I originally wrote this purely as a short story that never meant to be continued, but I've had several people ask pretty much the same as you did, and some who told me it needed to be a longer story. So,okay. I'll give it a shot, and see what kind of romance I can get... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

omg. thank you for reading my book!! thanks you for the good review, i'm really happy:) i'm only 13 and i've just started writing like a year ago.. it means so much to me getting and adult's view of my book again thank you so much:) !!!
well, i'm still thinking of the way to resolve the ending but i'm thinking of, like you said, 'cranking up my imagination' too haha:) you don't have to reply this though.. this is just thanks.... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

WOWOWOWOOWOW!! omg.. you REALLY GOODD!! I LOVE THIS BOOK!!! THIS IS HILARIOUS!! THIS really made my day..:DD sorry my capslock was on..haha.. please continue writing!! youre born to write great books!!:DD add this to my favourites. CHECK:)

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judycolella

Thank you so much! Life can get way too serious sometimes, and it makes me glad to know I made someone laugh. Thanks, too, for the kind words of encouragement. In fact, I'd like to offer a few of my own - I read your story about Pix ("Dear Stranger"), and it was totally... mehr anzeigen

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gooduklady

. . . and laughed and laughed out loud. So damned good. Please, expand this one. I would love to see an "Adventures of Meloria the Vampire".....you are amazing.

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judycolella

And you are very, very kind. As soon as I finish the werewolf story, I'll try and continue this one, to see where it goes.

Thanks again - you're a sweetheart!

J

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akshara1233

This was my favorite! The most funniest vampire story I've ever read! Even though I'm a big vampire and fantasy lover, this book made me see the funniest point!

Just amazing! I really, hope there's more! Have a nice day! xoxo

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yellowfin

Very, very interesting read. I think I'll be looking differently at cashiers at 7/11. I like the take on vampirism being a genetic disorder and her actually attempting to understand it by attaining a masters in Genetics. But really the best part of the story is thatMelora has balls! No I mean literally! Hahahaha!

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judycolella

Thank you for reading my story and for your kind comments! I really appreciate your taking the time. I've been surrounded lately by vampire fanatics, and needed to address the topic the only way I know how - with humor and what probably translates to my own brand of weirdness.... mehr anzeigen

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joeparente

This is a gem!! funnier than- well you know what i mean. it's certainly a twist for the twisted. I'm saving this as a favorite. Why don't you place this book in the group: Humorous Writings. I am the moderator. joeparente

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judycolella

Thanks Joe! Thank you, too, for the suggestion about Humorous Writings. I'm still a bit shaky about how to add things to groups, but I remember seeing something about it on one of the pages, so I'll give it a try.

Glad you liked it - I'm not a big fan of the whole vampire genre,... mehr anzeigen

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stolenkisses1337

That was awesome! :) You are an extraordinaire author. Happy Valentine's Day!

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judycolella

Thank you! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comments! This is turning into a very lovely Valentine's Day, indeed!

Hope yours is joyful, and thanks again!
:-D

~Judy Colella

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sereni

I had some good laughs very well written.Thanks for such a good read. Serena

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judycolella

You are most welcome - and thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the humor, too! Things have been a bit nutty around here lately, but I foresee a little extra time for reading in the near future. I already checked out one of your works (the spooky poem) and really... mehr anzeigen

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