Could you possibly do me a favor and go over one of my books for me? I need some help with grammar and it would be a lot of help with a second opinion. Sorry for bugging you and all.

I sent you a reply about a week ago. Check your messages. In fact, I'll check mine, too. I explained that I was working on both your story and that of another writer with whom I had contracted before I agreed to work on yours. His is a 306-page epic that has taken forever to do, because I'm more or less ghost-writing it. He did the basic story, but his English is quite poor, and he doesn't know how to build a scene. I have to divide my time between the two, but both are almost done.

I know I explained all this but I think it was through a message and not a profile post. Either way, it's honestly almost finished. My full-time job isn't helping any, but I make a point of working on the two stories a little each day.

Hi, Miss Judy! Thank you for your reply. I checked my messages. There is no message from you. That's why I post again on your wall. Okay. Since you reply now I know what is the progress of my story. So it means you have some edited chapters for me. Can you please send it to me? Have a good day.

Here it is. I sent it the same day you messaged me:
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Vivian
03-26-2018, 10:58am
Soon. For real. I've been working on yours while trying to finish up another for someone who hired me several months before you did. His book is a 306-page epic, so it's taken forever, but I try to work on both each day, and I'm nearly finished with yours. As soon as I can determine an exact timeline for you to expect it, I'll let you know.

And as always, thanks so much for your patience!
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You probably didn't go back far enough is all. I can send you what I've done, but I honestly feel like it will read better if you see it with what follows. However, if you insist, then of course I'll send what's done. I have to leave for work in about three minutes, so I'll try to get it out either later tonight (I work until 9:30 pm), or tomorrow afternoon since I have work at 8:00 am tomorrow morning.

Miss Judy, I think you sent your message to the wrong person. The written name above is Vivian. Not me. I'm Valerie. Okay Miss Judy. Please send it to me if you have time tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I like to read your edits. Thank you! :)

Hi, Miss Judy! Have you sent me an email because I haven't received any email from you. Please send to me the edits you've done which you told me before that you will send it to me. I'm excited to read your edits. Please reply to me so that I would know what happened. God bless.

Not at all- I'm a definite fan of Ellen, so thanks!

You give me an Ellen vibe :)

Lol, I hope that means you like my odd sense of humor. 'D

Yeah it means I like your odd sense of humor. I was secretly hoping for a joke or two, but we can't have everything we want.

I think most of my jokes end up in my stories, lol.

Hello, Miss Judy :) I hope you are okay. :)

It's been a long time since we've last talked and received a reply from you regarding your edits.

Please reply so I would know the progress of your edits.

God bless you and your family.

-Val

Can you send me the link for your book on how to publish a book?

I would love to. I'm taking a bus trip tomorrow and will be free to do some reading, so I'll give it a gander while I'm traveling. Thank you for asking for my input!