Just wondering if you would mind giving me more feedback on my work...I really benefit from your input and value your timely critiques. Whatever pieces you choose to review will be fine. Be blessed, Danny....
With a Tender smile
I give you my joy
with a Tender touch
I give to you my Delicacy
with a Tender breath
I give to you my honesty
with a Tender kindness
I give to you my care
with a Tender thought
I give to you my fondness
with a Tender embrace
I give to you my warmth
with a Tender feeling
I give to you my happpiness
With a Tenderness
I give to you my love
with a Tender restlessness
i give to you my dreams
With a Tender Dream
I give to you... mehr anzeigen
Thank you for accepting my friend invite ;)
You're welcome. I meant to tell you I really like your profile page background. Whose work is it?
I found it by looking through Google Images, I thought it was quite nice:
Hello Mrs Colella.
I sent the manuscript to Mrs Coleen Liebsch, but I haven't recieved any reply back, she is nowhere to be found, no Email, no BookRix, no Facebook, no LinkedIn... just nowhere.
Have you heard from her? :(
Cool, has Lillian ever worked with you on any book? .. OR have you ever sang with Leah and David?..lol :)
I do have Lily critique my work once in a while, and all three of us do karaoke together. 'D
Oh-my-gosh...hahaha, Cool >.<
thanks for the inside on the deleted user lol
Who is deleted user
Well, it's not John Galt, lol.
lol
Loving the new book
Thanks! It's how I handle extreme frustration, lol.
Lol I totally get what you mean by that. But why is there a deleted user and what is going on! I mean I go away for a while and poof everything is gone weird..... #$^&*
Yeah, that about sums it up - oy.
hey thanks for accepting me as a friend mrs
You're very welcome. ')
Hello, Mrs. Colella, it's me, annoying Milky...lol :)
I am here to discuss something important about me and this site, but before I begin, I would like to thank you for everything that you've done for me, I really appreciated it, it was an honor to have you as my friend, you are my friend, my teacher, my fellow user, I am very lucky to meet such a wonderful person which you are :)
I want to thank you, and few others who have... mehr anzeigen
Why, thank you! I don't get flowers very often even virtual ones, so I appreciate them a lot!
Aww, you're very welcome Ma'am :)
Ma'am, I got your Email, thank you very much for helping me out with my book, it means a lot and I really, truly appreciated your help, and thank you very mush for enjoying reading my book, and I sure will let you know how everything turns out with it, and will be in touch with... mehr anzeigen
Can u try my new book mam
http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lokesh-vyas-i-need-u/
Hey I know it's been a long time but did you like the play?
i wanna hear your opinion on it
Nice - interesting use of repetition to move the poem along. I like it!