you read the carpathion searies they are mint and so is this arrrr the book that you got the idear from carnt think of it but he is like and old man at the bagining and then when he is all cleaned up hes handsom but then realises she is his mate who has ....trained her self to be within the son light and then he gave her blood so she couldent afternthat arrrr its so mint donna matter anyway your book was realy good but a teany bit short but neverlesws still brill and hope yopu right others

less juicy than the other but just as good

you should make more

that was cute.

This book was to short,hope there will be more of it later on

Truthfully I wasn't able to even finish reading it. Being a fan of C.Feehan it didn't feel right. Use your creativity to write something original that is all yours.

I guess it's okay.

omg love it!!

omg love it!!

Your story is great!&Your ideas are clear enough. You must be more carefull with little details like caps at the begining of the proposition & some really bad errors.I , myself, have my problems with some words & make errors but when I write something important I use Google translate ;)

You have a gift of writing that i was not given or just have not tapped into. but until i do i am glad that you are writing and inspiring me to write as good as you.