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margarette

This was good...I enjoyed it very much it almost felt as if it was something we were feeling inside but was to afraid,scared,ashamed to admit it!.. it took a lot of courage to dig down and write your heart out like that Nice work Mr. Cesar

Sincerely
Margarette
A.K.A
Gigglez

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jo.reads28

WOW!!!! :D this was amazing! id like to read more from u!!! thank you!

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johncesar84

thank you very much, you can also read my other book man in the mirror.

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Carol Wills

John, I can tell this work came from your heart. While it may not be up to the standard of a professional poet your words spoke to me with sincerity and I thank you for sharing it with us...Carol x

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johncesar84

i am sorry if it did not meet others interest, thank you for evey ones opnion.

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gooduklady

I am sorry people. What I have read is apparently not the same as what everyone else is talking about. I thought this writing was very immature and child-like, and certainly not professional. It was awkward and poorly written. I have to speak my mind because I am tired of people pouring out praise on work that will never sell. I am sorry to have to say this, but I was not impressed.

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hawthorneheightfan13

i thought that "Why do you hate me?" was so great! I could really feel the narrators pain. I thought that some of the lines were really intense and wise...it was just really awesome!! :)

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johncesar84

thank you for taking the time to read my book. i will take the time to also return the favor and wish you to continue to learn from what the world has to teach, keep notes. Happy writing.

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kassandra.8

ure book is astonishing very intresting i was not in the mood to read but ure sis led me here this book inspires many things the name of this book makes it life digging into makes u feel to have more very good

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Gelöschter User

i really liked this. it was clear, emotional, profound. i felt like i was taking a trip into your life & seeing it.

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petra michelle

is so powerful, John! It's difficult to look yourself square in the eyes and soul and ask the painful questions, and find that there's sometimes no answer, but to just be.

Good luck on your book! A wonderful beginning! Petra :))

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