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pretty good!a little confusing for my age but good!keep writing!(my fav character is lilly!)
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pretty good!a little confusing for my age but good!keep writing!(my fav character is lilly!)
I like the fleshing of the characters and am anticipating how each will be drawn into the bigger picture....I like the depiction of the homeless teen who gathers her bottles not for booze but pencils and paper. Doing sketches I understand the beauty in the black and white. You have, in a sense, taken the black and white and made a vivid picture seemingly of failure but then as Scarlett was wont to say - "tomorrow is another day!"...Paula
Thank you Paula. I appreciate your kind comments./joe
You got my vote!!
Happy new year and thank you for your vote./joeparente
Very good character description, excellent voice. You've got my vote.
Your friendship is cherished and I wish you a very happy NEW YEAR./joeparente
I liked Ur Book.
Keep Writing!
Thank you./joe
The realities of life-WOW,some can be scary, but with God we all triumph in the end!I enjoyed each story to the fullest and I voted for your book.Great job!
Thank you for your vote and continuing friendship./joeparente
I haven't had time to read past page 16 yet, but as far as I have read, it's awesome! =D very good characterization!
Thankx
Love the beginning and i strongly suggest you keep writing it seems to attract attention and it seems to be coming along greatly =]
Thank you for your friendship and the time you took to read and comment on the book "FAILING WELL"./joeparente
The best bookj i have read all year/ Keep 'em comin'~~!
I love your comment!!/Keep reading and writing
I really like this book. I like about every book I read, but this one is really good. The problem is that you repeated part of Lilly's first chapter.
Thank you very much./joeparente