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jimebowen

As if I know some of these people??

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joeparente

I appreciate your comment and vote./joeparente

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sarwarchowdhury

Your style of expressions praiseworthy! My vote included.
regards

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joeparente

Thank you for your vote and comments

sarwarchowdhury

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blackbeard

I like the concept of your little stories of circumstance and character flows and how they can influence the direction a life can take. Although I haven't finished reading the whole book, I can suggest a few corrections.

Sixth line from the bottom on page 6
Consider:
No one ever denied he was a hard worker.

Page 9, middle of page
Consider:
“Her position afforded her a high standard of living”

Page 10

If they drooled on her., why the... mehr anzeigen

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jlove4u

This book was cool I would love to find out how it ends...........

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jbekins

This is a book that I want to finish . Super beginning! I can't wait to read the rest of it. I love the way you put words together/Jody
Let me know when its done.

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soccer19

Seems very interesting... but I've already voted... I wish I could've given you another. Good Luck!

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sereni

I enjoyed your book and your writing style I will anxiously wait for the rest of the story. Serena

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joeparente

thank you serena

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marieta

Well expressed characters ,Joe ,I wait to read the story...you have an amazing unique style..I like all your books...Mari

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joeparente

Thank you for your comment. ./joeparente
I can say the same for your work. You are very refined in your writings.

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mystoryisbeterthnurs

Very interesting so far with a cast of different characters that many people can relate to.
I also like our unique writting style.

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joeparente

thank you./joeparente

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jason.ronin

Loved the style of this book,and its also an idea than can take you off in many directions.Loved it!

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