You have quite the complex story line going on here. Alot of writers have trouble with just one, but you seem to juggle several very well.
Cant wait to read it in it's entirety.
I believe you deserve a vote! :)
C.B

This is a good introduction to a novel. You’ve given short narration about your characters & setting, which aroused the interests of your readers. I like your line, “He was happy, but inside his heart, he knew he failed.” This relates well to your title, Failing Well. I also like your book cover. Thumbs up and good luck!

Interesating and you have wea;th of talent in underdstan in g people and their thoughts and ways. Enjoyed it so far
Bluedragon

great story. I'm still wondering what will happen to them. Pls..let me know when you finish the story. I like to know what happens next.
You have my vote

Very nicely written. it would seem you know where the story is going.
Charaters well written. explained in detail through their lifestyles. Very well rounded story. God bless.

Love this book. Can not wait to see how will end.

I thought you had some pretty believable characters. The reality of the story was the defining part of your approach.

Now that you are in the race, I'm voting for your book.

Hi Joe...interesting premise and a nice tie-in at the end. To be honest, I'd prefer to read the whole thing as it would make more sense. But what you have written is very good and unique...and I am happy indeed to give you the very first vote. Valerie

Great twists like you said. So many people, so many stories, and so many failures.
What was Ben coming up with in three days...you gonna tell us? Or did I miss something?
Laz