I loved your story. Nicely written. I feel like I want you to send me the novel so I can finish it. Thank You for sharing. BBarnett

quite rich and meaningful work..

Your book is really good. The family bond between your characters, as well as the characters themselves, were great. Keep up the good work.

I just finished reading The Recipe. It was great, I enjoyed the images it brought to my mind. It was heart warming how the father used food as a reward at the end of the story.

This is so heart-warming without being sappy. When I grow up, I wanna be just like you! I'm getting back into writing and stumbling often. You are a great inspiration. Thanks, Jua

What a great read!

You pulled the reader into your story from the beginning with the action. I liked the story very much. You are a great storyteller.

I did want to know if you consider the book for older children or adults. It's my opinion that you could say the man cursed at the children, without having to use some of the language. I know some people do use that kind of language, but I don't think we have to be that explicit. I would take out the curse word about God.

I look forward to seeing more of your work. I will vote for your story. Thank you for sharing the beginning of your novel with me. It held my interest. I wish you much success.

Hey I know the subject is probably a turn off; just wanted to let you know some things. I am a very anylitical reader- your first scene contained a lot of curse words, which goes with it i guess. Also you made the impression that the striped shirt man was much closer than he really was. How did the boys move a ladder that a big man could hardly move? Nice dung trick! Great descriptions, you had me panting along with the guys! I didnt read the whole thing, but its very good from what i saw. *salivates for spaghetti*

Oh man! I could smell, and almost taste the food. The story pulled me in right away. Very enjoyable:)
Lee

I really enjoyed the characters you created. You enjoyed their personalities straight away. I believe though that you jumped subjects too quickly which made the flow of the paragraphs a bit jerky. Also, at times, I got a bit confused as to who was talking. But altogether, an entertaining story. Well done.