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What I especially like about WHITE DOWN is its homespun humor! A good book to lift one out of the doldrums.
What I especially like about WHITE DOWN is its homespun humor! A good book to lift one out of the doldrums.
I really loved your writing...and White Down was especially good. Thanks for sharing your work. Thanks Katy ;-)
Really loved White Down...just flowed together and really hit the points of the poem
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at YOU, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are:... mehr anzeigen
hope somebody compose music to it and sing it
What a great complement! Thank you./joe
You have got my vote! White down kept me interested the whole way through.
Thank you :)
I had to read it twice because it had all good qualities,it spoke of friendships, mothers, green (whitch is my favorit color. All in all realy enjoy all of them.
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at YOU, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are:... mehr anzeigen
I loved several poems in this collection, great job
Thank you William . Voting is still optional of course. I appreciate your comments.Joe
Poem of same title is best in book for me as it speaks as gently as it is intended to. No need to struggle for rhyme if the rhythm is true. Watch the heavy last lines in some. Liked short word plays as in Spring and Fish poems. Sea Sons and Head is Better Than You both have elements that carry but then too much is explained for me. Thanks for opportunity to read.
Thank you for your comments; they were very helpful. If you get a chance you might try "DEER ELK: LETTER". This group may be your forte'
Thanks again./Joe
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at life, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are:... mehr anzeigen
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at life, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are: "WHITE DOWN" and
"DEER ELK:LETTER" by joeparente. Thank you for your consideration./Joe
PS: I will read Your Works as you request. Comments are always appreciated.
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at life, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are:... mehr anzeigen
Happy Holidays! There are 2 entries in the Winter contest that I would
like you to comment on. They are funny ,short reads, dealing with
LOVE, NATURE and a look at life, set in a poetic form that I hope you
will enjoy. Please vote on them if you think they are worthy. They
are: "WHITE DOWN" and
"DEER ELK:LETTER" by joeparente. Thank you for your consideration./Joe
PS: I will read Your Works as you request. Comments are always appreciated.