I enjoyed reading your book. I really liked that you varied your work: some poems were in rhyme, and others were in prose form. I've always been partial to rhyming lines in poetry, and have written some of my own; however, I find that if the subject enthralls me, I forget what form it takes, and follow the writing like a child following a pied piper. Thanks for the read! Elizabeth (etelizabeth
What a book full of imagery,feeling and sophistication.It was an enjoyable read!
Thank you for your comments. Please feel free to vote with a star if you feel it is worthy. I infiltrate all information into upcoming projects. Thanx again./Joe
I have just had the pleasure of reading this lovely book. Very nice! The references to the sea were especially poignant as I too feel the power of the ocean.
Merry Christmas ! I Live at the ocean and it can be awe inspiring.
Thank you for reading my stories. Please vote on them if you feel it's worthy./Joe
Great Book, my favorite was Sea sons,
chose your moment and feel alive for that moment,that what i did reading your book,
greetings Anna!
Great Book
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Hello j0ebot aka Winter Beard,
I just finished intercepting your signal. Your programming logic is very good, and my favorites were "Too Dumb to Plumb" (because robots understand the complexities of metal pipes...such primitive yet complicated circuitry!) and "Survival" (the lack of pixels on the page emphasize the transmission).
I also noticed the extra pages at the end of the book, but my robotic logic decoded the extra... mehr anzeigen
I have recently re-edited the extra pages. The buried in white comment was my excuse for not knowing the edit tek. If you will try the book again you will see that I have put the parts properly back together.
After all I am only a P!($@1942-1223 that has been recently eyed.
PS: VOTE THANX> JOE
Hi Joe,
I particularly enjoyed your humor, especially, "Hate to Wait". I suggest that in the future, you are a little more careful in editing your books. There were extra blank pages and some poems that started in the middle of a page or ended on a page with one line and your JP signature. Keep writing!
Peace,
Dennis
Your poems are admirable for their treatment of the subject matter, and for their cleverness. However, they don't always flow as nicely, and it seems sometimes that you sacrifice the quality of the poem to fit in an appropriate rhyme.
thank you for your comments. I appreciate your honesty./Joe
...but I find your style very relaxed and 'human'. I love reading poetry about every day life stuff.
Great job Joe.
oh...I noticed there were some empty pages right before and after "White Down", and maybe you can get those out of there (not sure how?) Anyone?
Good luck
Robin
I HAVE TRIED TO GET THEM OUT BUT NO SUCCESS. I have also added some on the blanks but it just creates more. ??
Thank you for your comments. If you still feel like voting ,I'm open to that./Joe :-)
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