Hi! I enjoyed your book, White Down. Very entertaining. My favorite poem was Boorish bath. Kudos

Your use of contrasting elements in some poems and the interesting ideas on life were fun to read. Your short poems were quite direct and humoruous to read at the same time. Also "Foot Looks" is the one I liked most.

So,
Good Luck Joe!

Fish Food was my favorite. They all were good, You are very talented. I voted for you...Hope you win.

Loved the humour and the comments on life; the male point of view.

Joe you have to keep it under 25 pages I believe its the page limit. Between 20-25. If you don't shorten it, they will disqualify it, and I wouldn't want that for you. Thanks for sharing your variety of poems with us. Keep writing. =-)

"Sand Wind" and "Bubble Buster" were hilarious! And then "Fish Food" and "Spring" had a Dr. Seuss quality to them!

Through your poems, a very good introduction to Joe Parente!

Good luck! Petra :))

Some whimsical, some humorous, some serious.

Good fun.

Very entertaining compilation of poetry. There's something for everyone!!

Thank you for sharing and God Bless,

Tyrone

Your poems are very entertaining. enjoyed each one of them and I could relate to a few. Of course my favorite has to be the one about the mother and all she does.

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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