Very smooth gradient between humor and beauty, and you certainly explored it. "The Wetting" was my favorite--those verses seem as immortal as something you'd see quoted in a major encyclopedia.
Your writing style greatly reminds me of my step-father's sense of humor. He does't write as much anymore, but, when he does, it always brings a smile! Thanks for the nice work! richardearful
Thank you for accepting the friendship offered.I have 2 books in the
contest, Winter Poems. These are unlike other poems. They are instead
a group of stories that deal with Nature, Love and Life. If you have
time, read "WHITE DOWN" and "DEER ELK:LETTER". If you have fun with
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The clever use and twists of verbiage make this a unique and interesting read. Thoroughly enjoyable – highly recommendable.
another good one
Very creative
I am going to play Blink tonight
FP
A fun read! I enjoyed your puns! Missing had me smiling at the first line just knowing it was socks. The Wedding was my favorite.
You must have the same humor as I. Thank you for your comments and Merry Christmas to you and yours./joeparente
Thank you for sharing your humorus view of life.
Thank you for sharing your humorus view of life.
Thank you for sharing your humorus view of life.
Thank you for the opportunity to read your submission. I found it entertaining and rather refreshing. You like word play, don't you? :-)
Carmen
It's just one way to get the message across. Thank you for your comments Carmen. Merry Christmas to you and yours./joeparente :-)
You may also enjoy "WHITE DOWN". Voting, of course, is always optional./joeparente