is he cheating on her. if he is then he is a ugly fat mother fuckin playerr. pleeeesssee keeeeepppp ooooonnnnnn writing

add more plz!!!

This story is just so cute I'm already on chapter 8 and I can't stop reading it! I wish I had I guy like Jay!

XD

THAT WAS WONDERFUL I LOVED EVER MIN OF IT PLEZ FINSH I WANT TO GIVE YOU A MEDLE I LOVED IT OMG IT MADE ME SHAKY I AM STILL SHAKY WOW YOU ARE ALSOME

please write more

♪someones gonna get there ass beat!♪\(゜ロ\)(/ロ゜)/

ADD MORE

there are like a million mistakes that ive noticed... the stories good the ideas great you just need to polish it up :)

you wrote more nice the end was just what guys dream about

please hurry and finish it