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S.P. Johnson Jr.

A sweet story. There were a few formatting issues, but I call them forgivable as it's often just as much or more an issue with the site as with the author. My only real concern is that the three drabbles are not complete in themselves and therefore not compliant with the contest guidelines. All the same, well written.

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sahira.write

Great job!I enjoyed your stories.

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Glynis Rankin

that was so sweet.

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RebeckDawn

I really enjoyed your three stories and I must admit that now I'm thinking about how much I miss eating gushers!