Thanks guys! I really appreciate all of the comments. And tina2010, thanks for letting me know, I'll be sure to change it the next time I update it.
I like your style in writing your prologue. It really entices people to read your e-book. I like the dialogue, too. I haven’t finish reading this, but the first part is quite interesting. This can be a good fantasy novel in the future. Keep it up!
By the way, I think this is just a typo error because you missed “r” in the word “your”; it should be “Your mother and I . . . “ in page 6.
Have a great week!
Your doing very well, just keep up the good work.
This is an excellent start. The Prologue is done very beautifully and lyrical. Story has definitely merit. But your POV (point of view) changes from 3rd person to 1st person and back again. Usually a story is done in one narrative all the way through. Otherwise, good job. Robynn
'ello I've read whatcha got up so far and am loving it! I'd apprecitate updates to when you post more :)
-S.XIII
Again, thank you! The time between updates might be a bit long because I tend to get writer's blog a lot but eventually it'll all come together.
This is wonderful. Well written. You know how to capture an audience. Great job, can't wait to read more.
Thanks! You have no idea how long I've worked on the story.
Oh that's not the ending... It's only the beginning...
Soon I'll publish the next chapter or so.