Wow, I'm really impressed. Not only was that frightening but it was really entertaining, and even though I don't have asthma I was almost wheezing myself. Very impressive wrtiting indeed, filled with action, suspense and fear. Now I know about one game I will never play, thanks for the warning with this thrilling story ;)
that scared the crap outta me! but it was still really good
I am seriously checking behind me every few minutes now. Great work!
Scary!! I almost peed my pants! XO
this book was very short.... but it was really good.... you should make more.
that was off the chain make another one like candy man or something
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