This book is very interesting so far. I can say that I laughed my head off even in the serious parts. The main character is defiantly a crazy character. I'm really enjoying this, so please keep writing. I think it would be good if the got away somehow. They're in Walmart, so someone could see them and scream, making the guy drop his gun, and they escape or something weird, only to get caught again. This has got so much potential, so please keep writing!