ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job!
u boogus for downing her like that if u didnt have nothing nice too say u should have said nothing at all
this was a pretty great book you need to rite more please you have a great talent to be shared :)
sorry if i misspelled a few words chill haha, and im srry if u thought it was boring. i got a lil bored and i like 2 write so i wrote what came 2 mi mind (:
but 2 those who like it thanx for the NICE comments lol