it was ok

I liked it and all that...but you know(and I'm not trying to be mean) I think it needs just a teensy bit more dialogue, but over all I think its a great story!
good job

very boring

This was such a waste. I felt my brain oozing out of my ears when I read this. Where's the detail? And have you never heard of Spell Check? Not to mention it was so undescriptive that reading it was like watching a movie through a dirty smugged window. Maybe you should write, rough draft, spell check, and read again. Make sure it sounds right to you.

i've felt like this before

okay

I loveeed this story I can relate to it in manyy ways </3

OMG it waz the best of all

it wus good but what happend
after that

wow, y'all are cold